User talk:P.J. GT/Sandbox

My Thoughts
Dude your sandbox is really cool.I love it!!! P.s Some manga characters are good people (Prinz,Emperor, gloves) sorry its just wow Prinz is best boi (talk) 23:35, 28 October 2020 (UTC)

My Thoughts on your Sandbox...
I love it so far! I just finished reading the charecters and they all seem so cool(Except for blue team. Them I hate). My especially favorite thing is how the gear combos of some people like Andy who wears the camo combo, and Ava who has the CoroCoro combo, and especially Adam who has the Squid Stitch combo! I am still gonna continue reading! ChessMaster  [TALK]  15:34, 12 December 2020 (UTC)(P.S Sally seems to be a wee bit too aggresive :) )

Bands
WIP --Prinz the overlord 00:20, 5 January 2021 (UTC)
 * Blue: Splattack!
 * Gloves: Inkoming! or Calamari inkantation
 * Emperor (Manga version): Any ink theory song
 * Emperor (My version): Hooked
 * S4: We argue too often, but Aloha loves dubble bath, Army likes... we actually dont know, Mask loves Sashimori. Skull, Kraken up. Rider, Metalopod
 * Team 8: #8 regret
 * Hockey: Turf Master. Obviously so sweaty man
 * Facemask: Seafoam Shanty.

Here are mine: There you go! P.J. GT (talk) 01:09, 5 January 2021 (UTC)
 * Orange: Metalopod (S1)/Don't Slip (S2).
 * Blue (S1): Hooked.
 * Pink (S1): Ink Me Up.
 * Green (S1): Seaskape.
 * Purple (S1): Shellfie.
 * Turquoise: Split & Splat (S1)/Blitz It! (S2).
 * Yellow: Ink or Sink (S1)/Seafoam Shanty (S2).
 * Light Blue: Splattack! (S1)/Ebb & Flow (S2).
 * Lime/Lemon: Sucker Punch (S1)/Endolphin Surge (S2).
 * Soda: Kraken Up.
 * Green (S2): Seasick.
 * Pink (S2): Spicy Calamari Inkantation.
 * Grizzco: Fishing Frenzy.
 * Meta: Entropical.
 * Blue (S2): Inkoming!.
 * Purple (S2): Shark Bytes.
 * Sky-Blue: Rip Entry.

I know Valkyrie is in it and all. But can you maybe do one for Queenie and her new team Emperor (Gloves Prinz, Emperor and herself) BTW they are having a break from wars at the minute beacause Emperor got sanitized. --Prinz the overlord 01:24, 5 January 2021 (UTC)

About Crosshair
She should be an amazing sniper (Its in her name) Squid400 (talk) 16:35, 14 April 2021 (UTC)

@Squid400; Yep! That's what I'm going for! She will be like Power from Team Meta, but more fierce and aggressive. Just need to wait for S3's Official Weapon lineup. (Base-Game & Post-Release) Currently I'm thinking E-liter 5K Scope (If it IS gonna be called that), a Splatterscope (Unconfirmed) or a Bow (Obviously gonna be more than one of them). P.J. GT (talk) 17:09, 14 April 2021 (UTC)

Awesome!
Wow! This is totally amazing! I just read this and it is epic! I can't wait for the Splatoon 3 chapters! :) 𝕎𝕠𝕠𝕞𝕪𝔾𝕚𝕣𝕝𝟠𝟝&#60;コ:彡 (talk)

My Current Thoughts
So, I read everything up to chapter 2, and so far it's excellent! What really impresses me is the fact that you created all of these teams, each with their own personalities and gear combinations, along with a well-written story (so far) to boot. I think I'll read it incrementally when I have some spare time since I want to work on mainspace manga stuff as well. 17:23, 29 January 2022 (UTC)


 * Update: I have now read everything in your canon! If I were to provide some constructive criticism, then I think your canon could greatly improve from it. Firstly, perhaps Blue Team could have some more time in the spotlight. You could make Hunter actually get away with something malicious, and make a chapter or a story arc about how the protagonists work together to take down the Blue Team. Secondly, unless it specifically has content exclusive to this canon, don't go in depth on the single player campaigns of each game, as the average person reading already probably has a basic understanding of the plot of the first two games. (If not, then they can read about it in a plethora of other places as well.) Lastly, maybe tone down the large amounts of teams and characters for a few of them with fleshed-out personalities. (What's the point of making a character with a personality if you aren't going to utilize it?) I'm sorry if all of that sounded harsh or overly critical in any way, shape, or form. I just wanted to express my thoughts for the improvement of your story. Looking forward to the Splatoon 3 arc! Team X4-δ looks so cool! 16:02, 2 February 2022 (UTC)


 * (P.S. When Agent 8 met Jeff, my mind instantly went to the "My name Jeff" meme for some reason…)

@Cynical Prince; Thanks for reading my Sandbox Canon! Glad you liked it. Also to your criticism. 1: My Blue Team members wanted to get away with their malicious attitudes & actions, but always got caught. They are my "bad actions lead to consequences" style characters. 2: There ARE some things in my Hero Mode Chapters that are unique from the Games like Octrina as a rival, Jeff as a secondary 8 and the Sanitized Octobosses guarding the Thangs, as well as my Deepsea Metro layout being totally different. And 3: Yeah, I should add more detail to the matches with my side-Teams in the opening, tournament and Final Splatfest Chapters. I may plan on that someday. Also; X4-δ will fully debut WAY after S3 happens. (PS; Did you like my Mini Chapter referencing SSBU?)  05:17, 3 February 2022 (UTC)


 * I totally get your reasons for not accepting my criticisms. (And yes, I did think the SSBU chapter was pretty cool.) If I were to make a sandbox of my own, I would either make a story that takes place in the past (preferably around 1994-2002 M.E.), or I would make a story in the official manga universe, with sort of a "What if Team Blue never existed?" or "What if Team Order won the Final Fest?" kind of plot. Anyways, I like your canon! Keep up the great work! 14:14, 3 February 2022 (UTC)

(Dang, X4-δ won't be coming for that long???)

@Cynical Prince; Thanks again! The reason I made this was, in my opinion the manga is way too silly for me and was inspiration for it. Blue Team, (Goggles in particular) are just so pathetic in my eyes. This is why my characters are more serious and mature. You may have seen some of my characters' personalities, traits and gear combos are based off of Manga characters:
 * Dylan & Hal (S1 Look) = Aloha in gear theme.
 * Sarah = Headphones.
 * Hunter = Goggles in gear theme.
 * Cara = Bobble Hat in gear theme.
 * Xavier = Specs in gear theme.
 * Peter = Skull, in which they wear a mouth covering bandana.
 * Kyle & Rider (My Canon) = Rider (Manga) in appearance.
 * Frexa (S1 Look) & Dane = Army.
 * Duke = Gloves in which they both wield Splat Dualies, are Agent 4, and wear the Squidfin Hook Cans.
 * Alex = Vintage in gear theme.
 * Brittney = Mask, as they both were a mouth covering for an illness/disease.
 * Jen = Eight.
 * Valkyrie = Emperor in appearance, and Vintage in Rank & serious attitude.
 * Phill = Double Egg in gear theme.
 * Jeff = Seven.

Also, to your previous reply; I'm also not interested or into making "What If..." scenario chapters as I mainly have my Canon be based off of "Official" Canon (e.g: Marie (S1) & Chaos (S2) win). Lastly, I see that you're good at drawing Splatoon characters in the Manga's art-style. Can you make ones of Duke, Jen, Valkyrie & my upcoming S3 Avatar? Don't do the latter one now because I haven't finalized their appearances yet and I'd like them in the style of your "Shadow Prince" drawing please. Thanks. 04:52, 4 February 2022 (UTC)

PS: When I ment "in the style of your Shadow Prince drawing", I mean in the art-style you did it in. I don't want them in the "Shadow-Copy" look. Just wanted to clarify that. 04:58, 4 February 2022 (UTC)


 * Thanks for the reply. I don't usually take commissions, as the time it takes for me to finish a drawing varies immensely. Sometimes It'll take just a few hours, but in other cases when I'm less motivated, it can take days, or even weeks to get it done. Especially when it's several images. I have a lot of headcannons and other ideas of mine that are still in the works, but I'll see what I can do regarding your request. You can hit me up with a message daily if you want to know how they're going if you want. 13:20, 4 February 2022 (UTC)


 * @Cynical Prince; That's OK. Take your time! I don't need them immediately. Art that is waited for is better than one that is rushed! 🙂 Also, when you actually finish them, notify me on my Talk Page rather than the Talk Page of my Sandbox, as I will get a notification on my User Bar. Thanks.  15:20, 4 February 2022 (UTC)

My thoughts on your canon!
I finished reading your sandbox and I must say... clearly a lot of time and thought went into this. Every character has their own personality and gear sets, and not to mention the backstory for each game! I admire your dedication to make something different. I have not read the manga and while I may not agree with everything in the rules, this sounds like a fun AU! Props to you for writing all this, and I look forward to the Splatoon 3 section once the game is released! ~  Nick the Splatoon Fanboy   Let's chat!  09:39, 29 May 2022 (UTC)

My thoughts about it (It's amazing!)
I just wanted to tell you that this is amazing and clearly you put in a lot of work into it. Great job! 👏 OrderSquid38 (talk) 10:00, 24 July 2022 (UTC)

Your Awesome Sandbox!
Hey there! I read your sandbox and it is so good! Sally has a very spunky personality. I was really touched that you read my page, and thanks to you I got my sandbox link in (I completely forgot how)! You put so much effort into your sandbox!! It's really good and well organized. I didn't look at the Splatoon 3 one yet in case of spoilers, but once I finish the single player I will check it out. See ya! Clarinet.octo ( talk ) 02:17, 20 September 2022 (UTC)

Wow. Just wow.
Like everyone else has said, your sandbox is SUPER COOL! I haven't read all of it quite yet, but I'll definitely get around to it. I'll also make my own sandbox like this for my ideas and OCs! Thanks for the inspiration! The only fault I noticed was a super-small spelling error. You described Orville as 'coccy', it's actually spelled 'cocky'. Just saying! Amazing job! ArivakiVA  18:43, 16 November 2022 (UTC)


 * @Arivaki; Thanks! Glad you like it and giving you inspiration! I fixed the mistake you mentioned, so props to that. 👍 Also, how far are you into the story and who's your favorite character, Team and moment in it? (Also; My S3 section won't be done for quite a while, as anyone would suspect.) Sincerely,  20:11, 16 November 2022 (UTC)
 * Hello! Sorry I couldn't get back to you sooner, I was busy, and your reply button after your signature didn't work. I've only just started, but my favorite character is Dylan, my favorite team is Lime Team, and I don't have a favorite moment yet. Your writing is great, by the way! If it's alright with you, I'll give some constructive criticism. Also you're welcome, regarding the spelling error, and thank you for writing this! Have an amazing week!ArivakiVA S2_Gear_Headgear_Golden_Toothpick.pngJPTGoldDynamoRoller.png 18:00, 17 November 2022 (UTC)
 * Hi again! This is just a small error, but during the battle with Turquoise team, you wrote 'Nick fires off an Inkstrike to scatter them while Sally takes out Mia and Della with her Inkzooka as tried to slip past her.', and I noticed that it's supposed to be 'as they tried to slip past her'. Sorry, just wanted to let you know. Stories great so far, too! :) ArivakiVA S2_Gear_Headgear_Golden_Toothpick.pngJPTGoldDynamoRoller.png 18:21, 17 November 2022 (UTC)
 * @P.J. GT, this is sick! I agree with arivaki. I would nominate you for admin! *aggressive introverting* Marie dance.gifS3 Icon Shiver.pngS3 Badge Cuttlefish.png Mariefan 12:12, 23 June 2023 (UTC)

The smallest issue...
Uh.....hi. Again. What I'm about to say is something I mean in all due respect. I apologize beforehand. Anyway, your writing is amazing, the only issues really being spelling errors. My biggest issue with this so far, however, is Sally. She's not a bad character or anything, it's just...she seems a bit TOO hostile towards Hunter. I can see why, but there's something about her violence towards Hunter seems a bit...I dunno, unfair? He didn't actually do anything too bad in the past...I'm not telling you to rework Sally or something, it's just kind of bothered me. Sorry! I just felt like I should tell you about this. Everything else is pretty much perfect though! :) ArivakiVA  18:31, 17 November 2022 (UTC)

Hey. Again. Sorry.
Uh, third time I myself have commented on this sandbox (maybe more?), but I had a small question about the Great Turf War, and the other 'before the story' details. Are they from actual game lore and canon, or is it all headcanon? Just curious, so I can get to work on my sandbox. Thanks for the inspiration to make my own sandbox! ArivakiVA      #3a0ccd talk #3a0ccd 19:39, 28 November 2022 (UTC)
 * @ArivakiVA; Well, the first half of Part 1 and a few bits of Part 3 are headcanon as well as Part 6 too, but the parts detailing what humanity did to prevent their extinction (barring the DNA transplants), the rise and fall of Alterna, 'Octavio, Tartar & Grizz hatching their respective schemes', 'Callie, Marie & Pearl's singing contest performances', and 'Marina repairing and upgrading the Octoweapons' are from official canon. As for the Great Turf War Part, I just used what little lore about the war that's available via the games on it (Octavio's betrayal, Arowana Castle as some examples), while sprinkling in my own ideas.  20:02, 28 November 2022 (UTC)
 * Okay, thanks! I have some headcanons I wanted to use, so I was curious.  ArivakiVA    S2_Gear_Headgear_Golden_Toothpick.png JPTGoldDynamoRoller.png S3 Badge Classic Squiffer 5.png #3a0ccd talk #3a0ccd 18:17, 29 November 2022 (UTC)
 * Hey again! Small spelling error, in the first part of your series backstory, you misspelled 'Asia' as 'Aisa'. Just sayin!  ArivakiVA    S2_Gear_Headgear_Golden_Toothpick.png JPTGoldDynamoRoller.png S3 Badge Classic Squiffer 5.png #3a0ccd talk #3a0ccd 22:57, 29 November 2022 (UTC)